The country that I want to visit is Bolivia,
specifically I want to go to the El Fuerte de Samaipata, because lately I have heard
wonders about this site, you can see the place giving a click in the next link:
I decided to know this place because according to the image,
I can see that this site is very nice because it has a very clean sky, is a pleasant
place, is quiet, has an attractive architecture, has a lot of green areas, is a
place where you can stay doing activities like walking, running, enjoying the sight,
meditating and where you can receiving the energy of the ruins.
So I search more about of this site and I found that
this place is very picturesque, mysterious, has a very amazing story, is a Cultural Heritage of Humanity by UNESCO, is an excellent place for people that want to breathe fresh air, for
those looking for a cozy place to relax and
dream outdoors, for people that want to enjoy the warmth of people that live there or
go in search of adventure in the
various natural attractions of the
surrounding, is an important tourist destination of Bolivia. It is considered the greatest work of rock architecture of the world.
The main activities that you can do are meditating and pass
near the ruins to receiving energy. Some people say that the energy you
get is so strong that allows
for long time that you have an amazing daily activity.
It looks like a very attractive and tranquil place.
ResponderBorrarHere are my comments, you can correct your mistakes, in the option of "edit" entry.
*Don't forget the subject "it". Remember all sentences need to have subject+ verb+ complement.
This is only one of the sentences you need to correct:
"because has a very clean sky"-->because IT has a very clean sky.
* When you talk about activities the verbs are written with -ing. Example: I like running. My hobby is reading. The activites you can do are: skiing, scubadiving...
This activity was incredible because during the research I learned a lot about this country and specially of El Fuerte de Samaipata, which is a place that I was not have any idea that it exist, but probably for my next trip I will consider visit that place.
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